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Everything goes wrong
There's nothing left
I'm searching for solace
Desperate to find myself

I live in chaos
Everything's a big mess
Never Really wanted
But I'll still be there
There's no way out of hell

Day by Day I stand this pain
I'd take myself down
But who would pray?
A lost soul, never to be found
I stay alive, tall and proud

Behind my back lay trauma, trouble and hurt.
©2008-2009 ~wang-POW
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Author's Comments

I had no idea what category to use, this is my first time posting a poem.

Anihoo, I don't want to sound emo, cuz I'm not, but that poem somewhat describes what I went/go through pretty much everyday with my famlily and friends. j hflksfhb lfvj fv bf *bangs head on wall* ---must be happy-- *smiles* :D

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:iconaki-the-wolf:
You write very well ^^
Sounds sort of like how I am feeling right now..

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thakns :)
it's a suckish feeling :/

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If everyone cared and nobody cried
If everyone loved and nobody lied
If everyone shared and swallowed their pride
We'd see the day when nobody died
:iconmoonshadowwolf:
very well done wang!!!

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:iconwang-pow:
xD thanks!

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If everyone cared and nobody cried
If everyone loved and nobody lied
If everyone shared and swallowed their pride
We'd see the day when nobody died
:iconrououle:
nice :D
after ya think about it.......thats how i feel all the time
eh i can live with it :D
:iconmoonshadowwolf:
your welcome!

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but you're so young! you shouldn't feel that way :/

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If everyone cared and nobody cried
If everyone loved and nobody lied
If everyone shared and swallowed their pride
We'd see the day when nobody died
:iconsquirrely08:
I think everyone feels like that at least sometimes....
and you're right it is a suckish feeling.
very nice poem though.

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:iconjmoona:
Nice poem! :D

I like it.

Makes me think. :XD:

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:iconblackhowlingkiller:
the difference between an emo an normal people is the capacity of go through over problems and learn from them. I hope you do it someway... there are people that loves you :heart:~, I hope you get to be ok soon, nice poem

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